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Open Poetry #37

across the street from monday

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-01-29 08:47 AM

something about the time
of morning and how the sun
was listening in

while you talked about godiva
with your short hair
and I wondered

if you liked riding
not at a gallop or course
more of a saunter perhaps

you said either kind
of chocolate was fine
as long as you had the time

to know it slowly
and then the suggestion
of pressing coffee

on purpose and how
it makes everything taste
much better if you do it right

and I wondered about the edge
of your smile sides
what blend would go best

you turned your back then
and I enjoyed that time
to admire the asset of your curves

while my mind was traveling blind
_____________

daark

Katerie
Member

since 2006-01-27

Posts 92
Central New York

1 posted 2006-01-29 08:56 AM

The importance of a title has proven itself here. Then the words out proved the title. Great job. It's going in my library.

Like a ship blown from it's mooringby a wind off the sea- I have been changed for good.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-01-29 09:03 AM

Hmmmm...

horses
chocolate
and
coffee...

not to mention eyes....

all of my sunday favorite dreams...

think I'm keeping this one...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-01-29 02:20 PM

DS

"it makes everything taste
much better if you do it right"

So true!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2006-01-30 09:48 PM

a slow ride, to savor every sip

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2006-01-31 09:14 AM

you write like chocolate melting.

This is beautiful.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-01-31 02:54 PM

"and I wondered about the edge
of your smile sides
what blend would go best"

Your title is so perfect.

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