Open Poetry #37 |
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A Thing of Substance |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Thing of Substance One of the reasons I like a kiss so much is because its a thing of substance. For that brief moment of time, I am hers as she is mine. Passions awaken within our hearts and desire flows through a kiss, and the joy found in tender caresses becomes ours to hold and possess. JamesLee January27 2006 |
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EagletonDiva Member
since 2006-01-11
Posts 107 |
Very nice. Reminds me of what is so special about this and why the first one lasts forever. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So true. It is tangible. ![]() |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
The fact that it's written like it's speaking directly to us, in the colloquial no less, is something that's working for it. Very cool. Like a ship blown from it's mooringby a wind off the sea- I have been changed for good. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Eagleton, iliana and Katerie for the nice responses...James |
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