Something Unique - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #37

Something Unique

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2006-01-28 11:02 PM

SOMETHING UNIQUE

I'm the Holden Caulfield
Of the 21th century
Not quite right
Not quite wrong

I struggle in my ways
To make all ends meet
Only waiting
For my life to begin

And I often think
Of all the beautiful things
Unfolding everywhere
Without me

And I'd like to love
And be beloved
But love's never as sweet
As the idea of it

And what binds this all together
Are merely nothing
But hopes and wishes
For something better
*************************************************

"Oh, when I sit alone at night and wonder far and wide, I succumb to the sound of her heart.."

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

1 posted 2006-01-29 07:09 AM

"And I'd like to love
And be beloved
But love's never as sweet
As the idea of it"

lovely writing. xxx

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2006-01-29 07:43 AM

Please be careful not to let life slip by as you wait.

Touching read.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Katerie
Member

since 2006-01-27

Posts 92
Central New York

3 posted 2006-01-29 08:43 AM

Some of us, even as children, demand to live life at too fast a pace. Like Fee said, don't let it slip away.

Great work.

x

Like a ship blown from it's mooringby a wind off the sea- I have been changed for good.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.