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The Gardens Dew
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The Gardens Dew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Gardens Due I wait among the gardens hew To have a cup of dew with you To fraternize and feast my eyes On one that I do idolize I offered you a world you know A rainbow path, a castles show A kingdom made for you a queen To stay my heart a field of green I fill the meadows my bequeath With odors that the roses breathe Forget me knots that squeeze your hand And form a lovely wedding band The soothing of a shawl of lace The warming of a grace embrace The dreaming of a final goal The merging to a final soul And here I wait the gardens hew To drink this cup of dew with you |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
That was so good. I'm so entirely speachless, you have no idea. That is one of the best poems I've ever read, published or not. Fantasic... wow. Like a ship blown from it's mooring by a wind off the sea... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing from a lovely you~~  and good morning SyM |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
Needed to post again in order to add to my library... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Seymour, Beautiful poetry just slips from your tongue. Consistently wonderful! A pleasure to read! miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Romanceteer!  ~ Why can't my boyfriend write poems like this for me? ~ But God bless him! ~ He sure tries!  I'm tucking this rose of a poem in my personal folder of Love & Romance ~ and most of them are yours!  Have a glorious day, you glorious sonneteering man! Sending you a warm hug-o-love, EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Katerie What a flattering comment, thank you. Maureen, Thank you sweety.  Katerie I'm sure I'll be in good company. LOL miscellanea Thank you dear. Earth Angel You sure know how to make a fellow feel good. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are simply word-amazing~ 'I fill the meadows my bequeath With odors that the roses breathe Forget me knots that squeeze your hand And form a lovely wedding band' Forget me knots ... how endearing is this? VERY !!! I love a poetic day that has you in it~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And I do so love your replies.  |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
That is one of the most fabulous and endearing love poems I have ever read. Thank you for putting a smile on my face. Respectfully yours Kim |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jody5 Thank you to a very sensitive person. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great poem Sy. Most captivating. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you my friend. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very lovely, love it! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Charisma hug will see me through the day. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i love a romantic heart forget me nots as a ring~ as i read this i could hear an angel sing~ your a blessing sir My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
So sweet. Loved it! Kristabell |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sy, I remember a poem you wrote about a year or so ago and it left me with the exact same feel as this one...can't remember the name, and wonder if this is a rewrite of that one. In any case, it was one of my favorites then, and now this one is taking it's place. Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely! ....jo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well, I was so intrigued with this one, like deja vu or something, that I went back and read a bunch of your poems to see if I had seen it before. I found some similar topics, but not these same words, so now I'm thinking I must have dreamed it....lol...at any rate, I surely enjoyed the trip back into the archives and what beautiful dreams I will now have this very late night/early morn as a result of investigating so many, many beautiful poems. ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kristabell Thank you so much iliana Your comments were a delight to read. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Absolutey wonderific, loved the imagery, the meter, and the deep love embedded in your words. Write on! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rainbowdust A beautiful comment, thank you. |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
sighsss s s s simply magnifique sir poet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bagger Vance Thank you so much. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
back for another smile  well it has now been two years here and i am at a blank. i am sure something will inspire me thanks for being here My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES, Blank can also inspire. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your an inspiration and i am grateful My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Love you too. |
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