Open Poetry #37 |
the words of our making |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Why do I write the verses as they flow? Should I worry when they no longer flow, When my pen with ink no longer knows And my thoughts languish in their growth? Could I speak to hearts as once I could? Songless in tongue and melodies that could Raise the heart and soul to heaven’s goods Welcoming sunshine rays as faultless moods Woe to the speech that is weary, tired of creating a place To relish the goodness of a turn, a phrase outside its place. Praise to the minstrel who tells a tale of alluring spaces And restful lolls, leaning on a heart’s embracing Giving tranquility a home and thus creating The next line for a poem, the next word worth creating The thought for the thinking, an idea for the taking Reminding us why. . .we write the words of our making. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Absolutely wonderful poem here! Much enjoyed. ....jo |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This is elegantly exacuted and highly enjoyed. Standing ovation. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The thought for the thinking, an idea for the taking Reminding us why. . .we write the words of our making." ~ Thank you, Dear Poet, for reminding me! Loved your thoughts ~ and you expressed them so poetically! Love, Light, and Poetry! EA |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
We all run out of things to say but what we write afterwards is what we should of wrote before it comes and goes |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
very inspirational.... searching for a bit of your eloquence in word myslef! Very nicely put. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
can't speak for anyone else, but you certainly do not only speak to my heart, but place a song there as well... this was quit a marvelous write and journey |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Thank you all for your kind comments...was really just playing with a non-traditional rhyme scheme...like hanging clothes on skeleton...doesn't always fit just right...but, thank you all for taking the time to read and comment. Greatly appreciated. |
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