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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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FAIT ACCOMPLI Like a train Struggling through The darkness of night A thin ray of light Such was the love 'Tween you and me Only dreams But nothing to see Fait accompli [This message has been edited by Broken (01-27-2006 11:04 PM).] |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
Wow... that was really good. Sometimes poems as short as what I've just read don't work, but yours does. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent piece of work here..much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Amazing work. I admire a poem of few words. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
nice piece of work, liked it bunches. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Will be watching for more. Enjoyed the depth acquired in so few words. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Like a train Through the darkness of night A thin ray of light Such was the love Between you and me Only dreams But nothing to see Fait accompli |
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