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Within A Memory's Peek-A-Boo
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Within A Memory's Peek-A-Boo |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Within A Memory’s Peek-A-Boo ~*Marge Tindal*~ Within a memory’s peek-a-boo came old thoughts, loving you tucked ever so carefully away I knew I’d once more find them in a gentle caress, on a rainy, rainy day Yester-eve the rains came thundering down droplets pelting me with poignant recall in pound drenching me in tender remembers of exactly why I had gently tucked the memories so carefully away knowing that they would be right here for always seeking to caress this heart on a rainy, rainy day Some remembers seek my cheek as a teardrop Some bubble me over with laughter anew Oh, what a powerful storm of recall within a memory’s peek-a-boo~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You swetly applaud the blessing of loving memories. Thank you. Joyce |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Theres this feeling I get when I read your poetry. Some times other peoples as well, it means it's art in its truest form. If I put the paint & brush icon there that means I get that feeling. Your work is truely beautiful Marge. Huggs Kimberly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thankee gals~ This was a heartfelt penning ... I had not realized it was 'taking shape' until Delaney came up behind me and said, "~Poet, you made Pooh Bear's Honey Pot!" Indeed ... I had ... well maybe it is a pot of purest gold ... full of love and memories of love~ Kimberly~ That is a really sweet thing to let me know~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A lovely reminisce! Always rewarding to read your work! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You know Marge..Delaney is SO right on!! It is Pooh bear's honey pot. LOL. Excellent write and design. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is so beautiful. You are a true artist |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This fits my mood well today, Marge. The soft, nostagia of your lovely writing finds a special place in a woman's heart! ...jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh sweetie this is so tender and heartfelt, a beautiful penning of loving memories..loved the shape it took and the flow of it. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I SO appreciate knowing what each of you found to your liking in this little piece of my heart~  Thank you all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wonderful poem and I love the shape. It's amazing how you did that... or how the poem did it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lady~ Thank you ... often when my thoughts pour ... they pour into a 'honey pot'~  I appreciate the read and your sweet comment~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful marge  My spirit will rise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sometimes ... sometimes ... it does a body good to delve into the archives here at PiP~ This is a 'feel good' piece~ THANKS ALL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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