Open Poetry #37 |
In the still of the night, |
Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
In the still of the night Silence broken By echo’s of the thoughts racing through my mind Awakening every part of me Uncontrollable emotions stir within As I lay defenceless Powerless over that which now consumes me I become lost in thoughts of you Capturing every moment We have spent in each others arms Overwhelmed by the warmth of your touch Longing to hear the beat of your heart As I lay my head upon your chest I am left breathless In the still of the night (c)FH Expressions, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BEAUTIFUL!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so lovely!!! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fee~ Truly a lovely offering~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Fee...now I have that beautiful song in my head. Thank you. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
One of the best things about being here in these pages, is the beautiful thoughts and comments that each of you make. Thank you for sharing my heart with me. Hugs, Fee. Expressions, |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow! Most of us have had these thoughts, "sleeping alone in a double bed." You said it well! Thanks! Shenachie |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Beautiful!! and then He created the horse... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Fiona, what a lovely name. I do know this, oh yes I do , very well indeed. You penned this nicely. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic flow of words...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nice work. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Was a mixture of emotions leading towards that of what others try love poetry |
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