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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2006-01-23 03:38 AM

ocean, land.
and time.
five divide us
and i would gladly lose them

days, months, years,
i offer them all
to the indifferent one

for one moment,
one kiss denied

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-01-23 03:41 AM

Awesome write, Raph!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-01-23 05:48 AM

wonderful Raph, wow. I adore this!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-01-23 08:56 AM

Beautiful Raph!
Love it!!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2006-01-23 09:18 AM

whoa Raph this is awesome!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2006-01-23 09:36 AM

what land divides
and oceans conquer
shall never overcome
one kiss
carried
by a morning breeze . . .

This is lovely, Raph.

Nothing breaks the bond.
Land, oceans or years.
Nothing.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2006-01-23 03:08 PM

Sigh Bello...this is just beautiful

absolutely awesome

mxx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2006-01-23 03:22 PM

c'mere you, for a cyber hug
that oceans, mountains, time
cannot stop
lack of 'energy' might, though

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2006-01-23 06:57 PM

...sigh....

Do I ever know...only because there are so many oceans, metaphorically, realistically...and all...

Love you.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2006-01-24 12:15 PM

thanks jo, donna, nancy, Susea

sue thanks for that

so are ye bella, hugs

hugs, thanks kacy lol don't worry i've got my mars bars

aww, thanks and love ye too megs

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2006-01-24 06:15 PM

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

11 posted 2006-01-25 05:31 AM

I'd trade alot of things in to be with the one i love but it never seems to happen

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

12 posted 2006-01-25 08:31 AM

someone once said some crap about good things and those who wait...

blah...

don't take a chance..make it happen...soonest!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

13 posted 2006-02-06 11:02 PM

Love it! Wow, it's been forever since I've read you... and I miss it much. Take care, sir. Be well. Write lots.

Always, Alyssa

Hupomeno.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

14 posted 2006-02-07 12:24 PM

Powerful!

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

15 posted 2006-02-07 06:42 AM

nice,put me back in the day-dreaming mode

well written Raph

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

16 posted 2006-02-08 02:22 AM

glad i stopped by
enjoyed delving into your ink friend poet

White Gold Wielder

poetry_queen
Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

17 posted 2006-02-08 04:52 PM

glad i had a read of this, such a beautiful poem

keep up the good work leanne x

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

18 posted 2006-02-09 02:05 AM

danke

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