»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #37
»
Third words and to Hun -
| Open Poetry #37 |
|
Third words and to Hun - |
|
|
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
On a rainbow colours transformed a need to not understand but to consider what I was stopping That had so much magic Why was I stopping that magic What could I gain Apart from oblivioun A lack of knowledge of everything I never knew Dave Page |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved | |||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this...and don't stop the magic Let it work. Hugs, Ethel |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Dave.. This piece is  Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
probably will become one of my favorite Davewrites |
||
|
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wonderful read :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
||
|
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice dave My spirit will rise |
||
|
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I have a tendency to want to rearrange furniture and things, and after I have, I find I want to place to back exactly where it was! To rearrange or stop the magic of a rainbow...Certainly got my attention with this, Dave. Excellent analogy. It's good to see your work again. miscellanea |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am always thinking about what I dont understand...I figure there is a reason for it and stop trying ~~  M |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You write such intriguing, thought-provoking poetry, Dear Philosopher! You are always thinking and a pondering ~ and thankfully, sharing!  This is one of my favourite, Davisms!  Linda |
||
|
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I felt I wrote everything I didn't understand, was frightened of but lacked the understand to understand This piece is Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. An invincible summer. Yes dave Midnitesun 2006 09:50 PM Inappropriate content? probably will become one of my favorite Davewrites I hope what will be "gently" will have a place as well: As a wind gently slowing twisting you drew across my hand softly ruffling hairs on the back of my hand as you passed in a breath of wind touching a breath as you never turned leaving vapours entire in a fragment of philosphy woven froggy Wonderful read - gentle is for you as well :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, man will not himself find peace." Albert Schweitzer, Nobel Peace Prize Wi MGROVES Marsha I have so little time because time unless earning doesn't pay a mortgage. I wish I had to time to write more Dave nice dave My spirit will rise above the sea~ There will be no drowning of my soul or me~ miscellanea -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I have a tendency to want to rearrange furniture and things, and after I have, I find I want to place to back exactly where it was! To rearrange or stop the magic of a rainbow...Certainly got my attention with this, Dave. Excellent analogy. It's good to see your work again. miscellanea It is good to read your words as well nakdthoughts Member Laureate -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am always thinking about what I dont understand...I figure there is a reason for it and stop trying ~~ Naked You always understand too much and I think at times you consider it wrong. From a high place does my mind blind that I should not see what transcends and teaches Dave M Earth Angel You write such intriguing, thought-provoking poetry, Dear Philosopher! You are always thinking and a pondering ~ and thankfully, sharing! This is one of my favourite, Davisms! Linda Linda You honour me Dave |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
