The Mending Of Heart Break (2 triolets)

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2006-01-22 03:23 PM

*~*
When heart break comes into a life
And with it all the pain it brings
Will cause agony, pain, and strife
When heart break comes into a life
Feeling as if heart's cut with knife
Questions in mind constantly rings
When heart break comes into a life
And with it all the pain it brings
*~*
If someone special comes along
Who shares their love beyond compare
Also bringing their heart's love song
If someone special comes along
Daily, gently, healing grows strong
Mending heart break with tender care
If someone special comes along
Who shares their love beyond compare
*~*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-01-22 03:50 PM

Truly a beautiful expression of love Ethel.
What a beautiful write this is.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-01-22 04:17 PM

Perfect

Dave Page

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2006-01-22 10:26 PM

Nancy Lee and Dave,
I thank you both very much for reading
and for your replies.

Ethel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-01-24 06:03 PM

Beautiful....James

Fee
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since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2006-01-24 09:08 PM

It's amazing how someone special can make all the difference to our lives.

I enjoyed this alot.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-01-24 10:50 PM

Your Triolets are lovely. I enjoyed them very much.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2006-01-24 11:01 PM

Well done, Ethel!!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-01-25 09:29 PM

You do these so well, Ethel! I can't do them at all, afraid to even make an attempt...oh, maybe someday. I really respect your talent with these; not only are they true to form, but also so very meaningful.

....jo

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2006-01-25 11:10 PM

Ethel Mae, the combination of your sentiments, the poetic form, and the expression of your loving and compassionate heart, make this a very special post!

Loveya!
Linda

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

10 posted 2006-01-27 12:55 PM

You are someone special Ethel, and you deserve all the love your heart can hold~

Enjoyed~
ARH

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