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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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air escapes the lungs... bleeding through fingertips... raw... from scratching beyond the surface of emotions buried too deep... too long... a final cry... 'help me'... goes unheard... and this?... the finale... it is finished... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, this one hurts, Lady. It feels so painful. I so hope this is just writing and not the way you're really feeling right now. I do know that you are capable of writing on ANY subject you so desire.....remember the "Paper Clip" poem? One of my favorites of yours!! I do think a lot of you, Vicky. You are a very good friend to have, you know. With love and heart hugs to you,  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Good strong final cry. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'd begun writing something very similar to this earlier this morning. In fact, the words "help" and "unheard" were used. Then I got a phonecall.  Hope the day looks up... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
 and then He created the horse... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you are not unheard, not here Matter of fact, me hears be hurtin' from that screamin'!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 a good last straw write |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thank you, everyone... Was just one of those days... yanno?... but I'm okay... and I truly appreciate your comments... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Must have been crucifying--Glad it's in the past. Shenachie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
deep stuff.. But as always, you "sift" delightfully... hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beyond the surface of emotions buried too deep... let it out...otherwise it will eat you up inside~~ ( scream it or write it...but let it out...take it from one who held words in once for so long I actually got laryngitis for a year ( hmmm..some would say that was a blessing  M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Forceful and very well written. |
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