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Everyday And Every Night
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Everyday And Every Night |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Everyday and every night, Comes and goes quickly, One day, When the time came for me, To know love was all that, I need Everyday and every night I pray to Lord, For all I need, Word came true I pray everyday and every night All the sorrow and pain would go away, Everyday, When the sun comes out quickly Into my eyes, I see the light, everyday and every night, Comes and goes it quickly, Every day and every night, I see of a warm sun, That melts away, Every day and every night, wanted so much, in life I can't think of anything That I wanted it so much In life, Everyday and every night, [This message has been edited by vandana (01-22-2006 12:55 PM).] |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Every day and every night, wanted so much, in life I can't think of anything That I wanted it so much In life, Everyday and every night, And may you receive your hearts desires, Sweetie. Hugs, Ethel |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
From yourself Thought provoking Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
:waive: Straight from the heart, this is. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I can tell you want it so bad..you allowed me to feel that in your poem~ Hope you get it soon before you burst~ hugs~ARH |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I believe I heard that prayer should be unceasing, and may it be so for you. There was a rhythm within the repetions which reminded me of a meditative chant, which certainly helped to convey your intent. Very nicely done! and? Enjoyed.   |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this timeless chant from the heart, Vandana. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Vandana! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
Neat write- I would encourage you to work on your meter, but the thought content is very good. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I enjoyed - thanks for sharing. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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