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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Alright to take a stand all right for the more traditional fine weather today sun shines on resolve acceptable winds moderate currents dissipate inner struggles to wisps of neglected thought. I deal with what I know it's fine to wander into another's shadow strong to leave aware of pretence as friendly chatter turns to command let others follow they are needed to serve. Alright to pawn favors a perfect write a deed for a return friendships stand falter alright they go as usage becomes intolerable alright to take a stand eradicate the weeds of faulty welcomes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan "falty welcomes" now that is a poem in itself. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
eradicate the weeds of falty welcomes good words... understand the feelings~~ M |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
You paint a picture that a lot of us see Networking is a choice between using and discarding or intimacy I like the portrait Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks Sy for the error spotting, Maureen appreciate your reply  Dave, good words.. many an intimate moment has soured because of the need to advance out there in this world |
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