Open Poetry #37 |
To You |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
To You I said I loved you nothing has changed that did you think it was just circles in the wind a movement that blows too softly close to touch in the stirring of a brush there, and then just gone more than just the whispers that trembles the trees yet, words are all I own and I give them all to you just some words cut out |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
good words from your heart journal M |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
...words are all I own and I give them all to you" Words, thoughts, ideas, visions, that connect one soul for a moment to another become the greatest gift one may give to another; all else pales before the union of awareness. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
love it Dave |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
yet, words are all I own and I give them all to you This is so true ....... Especially in long-distance relationships when physical touch isn't possible so many times. Good writing as always, Helen. Hugs, Ethel |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I LOVE YOU! I missed you so much, lady. Did you know that? Excellent writing. Always. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
This reminds me of the old Glen Campbell song: "Its only words, And words are all I have To steal your heart away." Don't know who wrote the song, but I want you to know that you carved a new facet on a similar sentiment. You said it very well. This is a gem! Shenachie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hey there! It's good to read you again. This is so expressive, Helen. ...jo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gosh, I could have written this and you know what? Some people really do think they are only words. Those are the ones who just werent open to your love at that time in your life. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick each of us are given a few words to make the world more lovely they can only be used a few times from the heart before they become nails yours are precious enjoyed |
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