Open Poetry #37 |
Somebody Heard My Cry |
jackiej Junior Member
since 2006-01-21
Posts 12USA |
SOMEBODY HEARD MY CRY Going thru another storm, Me, Myself and I Zero visibility began to cloud my sight Leaving me scared and feeling helpless I begin to cry I thought no one cared about What I was saying I thought no one was hearing My prayer I was praying SOMEBODY HEAR MY CRY So thinking to myself, as I went thru another day This hell I’m dwelling in, is a place I need not stay For my heart was bleeding with intense, crucial pain From being cut, chopped, sliced and diced I finally realized, I was in a routine drain I felt so depleted, I was allowing him to pull from my soul I had to make some serious decisions Not to have myself under his control SOMEBODY HEAR MY CRY Because my mind was in a tug of war Being pulled from left to right I was constantly beating myself up As though I was in a 10 round fight My insides was torn into several pieces Making it harder and harder to get thru a night But a small faint whisper of a voice Said to me, "I would soon see some light” As the battle between the devil and me got very intense I called to my Lord, to please come to my defense God with his almighty self, rescued me in the nick of time Because Satan put before me things, that seduced my mind I thought no one cared about What I was saying I thought no one was hearing My prayer I was praying SOMEBODY HEARD MY CRY |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JackieJ~ I like this VERY MUCH~ Welcome to PiP ... it's a lovely circle of poetic friends~ Read, read, read and enjoy~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jackiej Junior Member
since 2006-01-21
Posts 12USA |
Marge I thank you for the warm welcome and reply. In the very short time that I've been on Pip, (which is today) I've come to know your warm and encouraging spirit through your written words. May the Lord continue to bless you as you bless others. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions, Jackie. You put together a very deep write, and did it well! |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
This gave me a familier chill. I too faught the darkness and thought that I was alone, and I to found that I only needed to look up and find my prayers were being herd. Hugging you tight, Fee Expressions, |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the PiP family. I look forward to reading more from you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS JACKIE! I so much enjoyed your entrance post. Please check your email for a special Passions greeting. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Excellent... intense! Enjoyed the read. Welcome to PIP. Melton |
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