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themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-05-19 08:46 PM



We are not like two brothers anymore
Ten years gone and we didn’t grow together
Sadly no, for our paths have parted more
You have found a dream so mine are weathered
No more will we walk as friends of the stage
Now I’m fallen for the love of the world
Soon we see no more of the others page
I live for the dream you live for the girl
So it shall be as we differ in lives
How sad is the thought you’re not the best friend  
Yet to a new dawn we seek and do rise
To new beginnings that start with an end
I wonder true deeply for I don’t know
Cannot we be friends ‘till life ends the show?  


© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-05-19 09:54 PM


Such richness in the lifelong friendships...endearing, enduring...
Even as time passes, changes shape our course...Never to forget.

You are writing beautiful dreams.
TD

The Shadow in Blue
Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan
2 posted 2006-05-19 10:01 PM


Man your series of sonnets are pretty well written and flow well-I like how they are all somehow connected in the grand scheme of it all.

^_-
J.S.

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