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Funny Feelin'
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since 2005-12-14
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0 posted 2006-05-19 12:28 PM


Below formed the framework
upon the scaffold, witness
memorial bridges-to-be
only built in dreams

Architect, you are everything
dust my eyes
nevermore wary of awakening
no surprise

Overseer of the unconcious fields
leads us all to the pillars, sifts
the gifts of the sandman
and brings us to reveries without structure

There's no surprise, cut your ties
to the weary world
take your rest now

Close your eyes, cut your ties
to the weary world
let his dust fall down

Architect, you are everything
dust my eyes
share your wealth with the whistler
whose song brings the sunrise
with the restless souls
whose dreams have capsized
Architect, lead us all to your pillars
and let us rest our tired eyes

© Copyright 2006 Funny Feelin' - All Rights Reserved
XOx Uriah xOX
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Virginia
1 posted 2006-05-19 12:34 PM


Outstanding !!!!!   :: bows ::
Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
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Dinwiddie
2 posted 2006-05-19 05:20 PM


Nice poem, man.  One of my favorites that I've read on here.  Keep it up.


-Stinky Twinkie-

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