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shades of paul
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0 posted 2006-01-08 10:00 AM

Beach scarf in chiffon whirls, drifting in the wind.
The cascades of lace water, fell in spiral motion.
Interweaves of braid, that bathe in bright sunshine.
Curve of sparkle rapids, curls thru the green emerald forest.
A windward gust meanders the fragrance, of Mother Nature's incense.

See it, taste it, touch it, hear it, smell it.
These Five Twisting Winds are of the enchanted voyage of senses.
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (01-08-2006 10:57 PM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-01-08 10:18 AM

Five twisting winds...
the title alone
is a vision of sense.

Well done, Sir.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-01-08 10:22 AM

....Saved faster than you can say "Mother Nature"!

I thoroughly enjoyed this treat to my five senses!

Love & Light,
EA

scorpio
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right...there

3 posted 2006-01-08 10:24 AM

Beautifully penned.

believe in what your heart feels...

shades of paul
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4 posted 2006-01-08 10:36 AM

My thanks to all of you, very nice replies.paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Nightshade

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just out of reach

5 posted 2006-01-08 10:41 AM

I'm with Earth Angel on this gem - keepin' it in my library ! Wonderful paul.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-01-08 11:17 AM

"See it, taste it, touch it, hear it, smell it.
These Five Twisting Winds are of the enchanted voyage of senses."

I did!! I did!! Love this one Paul...
straight into my library this goes.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

shades of paul
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7 posted 2006-01-08 03:22 PM

My thanks to you both, Chris and Nancy....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

tracie66
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8 posted 2006-01-09 04:56 AM

paul~
a very enchanting, captivating and visual write... well penned.

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

shades of paul
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9 posted 2006-01-09 07:55 AM

My poem butterflies are free...Thanks Tracie.
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

iliana
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10 posted 2006-01-11 12:55 PM

Brilliant!

shades of paul
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11 posted 2006-01-13 08:43 PM

Thank you so much,very nice reply Iliana..........Paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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