Open Poetry #37 |
Haiku Rewrite |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
In the beginning God created the end and So came beginnings |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, Your words are the essence of Hebrew thought. Their new day begins at sunset. They claim the end is the beginning, conclusions are springboards to something new. They never defined perfection as the ancient Greeks did in the form of a circle. Their idea was simply a straight line that is open ended. The ancients put the golden age in the past, while the Hebrews put it at the end of history. They saw perfection as the "best is yet to come", though we may have it rough in the going. Great short summary of their thinking. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You *gift* us with such wisdom~ I adore this little shorty thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed this muchly.... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
We must have an ending to have a beginning. Wise words Sy. I enjoyed them greatly. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well said - very well said! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BROTHER JOHN You have a fine literate mind for few have undestood its meaning. Thank you Marge, LeeJ, Candy comes in many forms. Lady, Your replies are the favor of this knight. Honeybunch, Thank you, thank you. passing, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
So true. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
As usual, I love the way you write....wise senryu - so true Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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