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Sonnet |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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Far reaching thoughts for which I am somber Thinking of her and those lips no fairer She finds me a friend so still I wonder For I love her so I will not snare her Would she take my love for her truthfully Would we make hot eyes with our passion? Instead with eyes hot bitter scrutiny Such saddness is true with unseen fashion A wish for a dream makes me a dreamer Dreams are for gone within realms never seen Yet dreams have come true for I have seen her My story is older no sadder has been I spend my time my love for her hidden No greater love than the one that’s forbidden |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*wow* I loved this!! total keeper  ‘I want to swim away |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You did a wonderful job with this one. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and now I've had the pleasure of enjoying all three beautiful love writes unrequited can be such poetry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I don't know much about sonnets and the way they're supposed to be...but no matter, I really loved the rhythm and feel of this love song! |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
thank you all, I learned how to write in sonnet form only a few days ago but have now decided to write a whole cycle of them(a group of 100 or so) all of them as good as the last I hope. |
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