Open Poetry #37 |
Another Day to Give (for SEA) |
poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
5402 Another Day to Give 17 May 2006 As to a sea, another ocean by name This answer to water, droplets of least shame Sleep in hearts, hidden to breast those arms loving in ways of reach One day, one answer, as if time was unity Step by step, footsteps to forth stride Waves upon water, drifting to dream another night alone, another day to give Seeking comfort, wanting freedom would it be truth, southern to unify Another dime to spend, dollars to sense rich to sorrow, maybe then tomorrow For what was an ocean, another see a view, a vision to vista partake To never know, for this was heart another day to give and never part “And God said, Let the waters under the heaven be gathered together unto one place, and let the dry land appear: and it was so. And God called the dry land Earth; and the gathering together of the waters called he Seas: and God saw that it was good.” Genesis 1: 9-10 KJV a poet who cares |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is going into my library. How completely beautiful, and how sweet of you thank you!! ‘I want to swim away |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Waves upon water, drifting to dream another night alone, another day to give" a very nice line |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a precious write for a precious lady |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
beautiful......absolutely beautiful |
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