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Open Poetry #37

You're Beautiful

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-05-16 10:33 AM

you pulled him to the side

while i watched our Pacific tide

                go by

i walked home that day desperately needing to cry

it hurt so bad not getting to say hi

that night curled up under some blankets i repeatedly asked God why

              i love you

                                                      howard

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-05-16 11:28 AM

heartbreaking and bittersweet
wonderfully written

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2006-05-17 10:45 AM

I wish I knew the answer to your question. Paramount for me is your subject can/does love. Courage Howard, there are MORE fish in that Sea.

INclan

bens101
Junior Member

since 2006-05-05

Posts 32

3 posted 2006-05-17 11:48 AM

  Howardtsu, I really loved this one, it was
  really simple, beautiful, and vivid,
  - great job!

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