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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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He pounds the keys, hits deep inside the centering of me, brings me to my knees begging for more please as the notes cascade down the walls of my heart, ears hearing celestial notes earth beings rarely conceive and then he does leave me in silence last notes hanging in mid air like a dove or perhaps a glider sensing magnificence and then I escape the confines of earth to soar amongst the skies beyond the reach of all the mud and mundane machinations humans wrap themselve up with and then turn out the light, believing all is well as the globe spins itself faster and faster toward Hell. Is it any wonder I choose to wrap myself up tight in a cocoon of musings each night? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Makes perfect sense to me... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, so I'm sane, after all? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Makes a lot of sense to me too, Kacy! I carry my wrap of withdrawal from a harsh and crazy world wherever I go but not so anyone notices of course. Perhaps its only in our own musings that we can find a hint of peace so wrap up tight, dear lady, it's cold where I am tonight. Great read! |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Oh, this got to me: "hits deep inside the centering of me, brings me to my knees" Ummmmm, Wonderful, job, THANKS! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hunting for a blanket myself, Kacy.  (Great write!) |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Aaaaaaaah, I finally found it. Anyone have an antidote, A paliative for writers block? What more might readers want to read of me? I want to believe there is still a treasury of stuff within, if only I could converse with my own thought s or with others who may want to know the treasury of my inner world. But for now, I guess, I may just have to wait, and instead, occypy myself with nonsense in the mean time. Actually I could post this. But I'm in the pips editor and would somehow have to cut and paste it into ms word. The Southern Cross. Hugs. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
blankietime grinning at you amigo Jaime [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-16-2006 07:08 PM).] |
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penguin5 Junior Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 21Washington |
wow, not that opinion of your superior poetry means much, i still love it |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a blush of thank you and a welcome, penguin...love that pen name! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sensing magnificence and then I escape the confines of earth to soar amongst the skies beyond the reach of all the mud and mundane machinations humans wrap themselve up with and then turn out the light, believing all is well"  this is so awesome!  ‘I want to swim away |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"He pounds the keys, hits deep inside the centering of me, brings me to my knees begging for more please as the notes cascade down the walls of my heart... last notes hanging in mid air like a dove or perhaps a glider sensing magnificence and then I escape the confines of earth" ____________________________________ I absolutely LOVE everything about this! I've re-read it 3 times and something new leaps out everytime. It's a keeper Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I personally know artists of this arrest... but I would love to know whom it was you listened to, just so... that I could nod and nod again and say yes... tis so... oh please, if you would let me love this with you.  Unveil the name... if you would... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no need to wonder why message understood here fully |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, what a warm feeling I get reading these replies...you guys are so kind! Melissa, ya made me blush! Ok Sunshine, since you asked about the inspiration... it was a combination of listening to pianist Keith Jarrett, specifically The Koln Concert (1975) and then reading some wonderful poetry |
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