Midnight -This will be your last allotted poem for today

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Open Poetry #37

Midnight -This will be your last allotted poem for today

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-20 09:07 PM

Her name was Midnight
From her car
She was needle sharp

I was the boy
Called that for life
And she makes marks on my life

Never ever knew midnight
Didn't sleep that easy
And she purr'ed as she slept

She was Midnight Blue
Only name
Only thing

Strange that Midnight was as different as I was
Neither from anything
Changed to order

In the end
I walked away with Midnight
Knowing her more than anything

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-01-21 12:12 PM

Dave~
There is a 'something' that draws me to read this one again and again ... a cadence that my poetic mind is 'hearing'~

I just know that it likes me VERY MUCH~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-01-21 04:13 PM

Thanks Marg

Apart from some waffle I will start writing more than the scope

Midnight is alwas Midnight

I'll invent some midnight words

regards

Dave

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

3 posted 2006-02-06 03:39 AM

this is very touching, enjoyed this one

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

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uk

4 posted 2006-02-06 03:51 AM

Midnight was her name dark as the meaning

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

5 posted 2006-02-06 05:39 PM

"In the end
I walked away with Midnight
Knowing her more than anything"

Fascinating...I enjoyed it.

FNG
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since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

6 posted 2006-02-15 06:33 AM

"she was needle sharp...
And she makes mark on my life."

like this!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

7 posted 2006-02-15 06:55 PM

LOL
and my pen name being midnitesun
sometimes, I am called midnite
and purrring through all the lines above,
I have loved a black kitty
whose claws left a mark on my heart

poetry has that effect on me, too

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