Open Poetry #37 |
Dear |
StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Dear You finally made me happy dear, it brings a tear of joy to my eye. I wish I had recorded, every single word of your goodbye. Then I could listen all over again, on those dark and dreary days. Your sad goodbye would shine upon my heart, like the suns healing rays. You finally gave me reason dear, to sing and celebrate. I wish it had been sooner, but I'll gladly settle for too late. Let me get that door for you honey, you dainty little creature. I always knew your backside, would be your most endearing feature. I do hate to see you leaving on that tried old bus, as you flee from this disaster. If you left me on a plane dear, you could leave me so much faster.:-) . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Steve....it is true that sometimes the door closing can be a happy occasion. I hope all is well with you! |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Big Hug Martie, yes all is well, just remembering a happy day! :-) |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Thats pretty funny stuff you been wanting to get rid of her for ages and then she decides shes had enough and leaves Hope you reply to my poem since i took the time to write this |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
haha Shades of..."Thank God and Greyhound You're Gone" good job! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good write here Steven! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
OH, DEAR! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steve~ Thanks for the Saturday *giggle-schmiggles*~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Thank you Redstone, miracles doth never cease! :-) Thank you Uriah, gone can be such a beautiful word!:-) Thank you Nancy, glad you enjoyed and hugs back at ya! :-) Thanks for the read Klassy, I love the little smily guy waving goodbye. He captures the essence of my mood!:-) Thank you Marge,I love giggle schmiggles!:-) |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Another great one Steven I bet you have made it a country song I'd love to hear the music to this one Debo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nothing like a happy "Dear Jane"...so to speak... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I always knew your backside, would be your most endearing feature" Oh Steve. You never fail to delight me. :-) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're such a scamp! |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
One door closing opens another! Good thing that door swings both ways! Sometimes goodbye can be as happy as it can be sad! picturegramic |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Thank you all very much for the read and reply may you all feel so relieved if you should ever say goodbye. :-) |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
One more great love poem you are just full of words of love thanks for posting. Tom Zart. |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Heartfelt...nice write! |
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