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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2006-05-13 09:22 AM



Drowning
within gauze like dreams
screaming
you
so distant
pain in my hand
When will
I begin
to comprehend
the tears
that choke
my sight
the screams
stuck
within my throat
when will
I
Capitalize
love
when will I
comprehend
the emptiness
you leave me with
when I walk into
the bedroom
when will
I finally
realize
it's time...
for me
to walk away
I drown
within your gauze like words
and mellifluous lies
you tell me
you love me
but your past
is telling me
otherwise
I'm blinded
by your shadow
when will
I learn
to walk away again
when will
the Angels
give me the strength
I feel weak
within
your gauze like dream
I'm drowning
energy gone
when
will
I ever know?
I don't want
to walk away
and regret
knowing
that
you
were
meant
to be...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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just out of reach
1 posted 2006-05-13 10:31 AM


You will when and if this passionate love you give out, is given back freely in return.
Heartfelt write is this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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