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Archea
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since 2006-05-13

Posts 65
United States

0 posted 2006-05-13 04:36 AM

light shadows falling
caressing my face.
falling with burden
burning with grace.
blue skys are gone now
replaced with dark grays.
my eyes see in darkness
through the haze.
as that last ray
shines on your wings
i look on the luster
the radient beings.
will this dark cluster fully ensnare?
or will the beams
shine outward there.
now i see,
as light shadows turn to must,
light always prevails
dark covered in dust.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-05-13 06:10 AM

I enjoyed your first post...welcome

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-05-13 07:07 AM

you know just by the title, I HAD to peek LOL

Excellent first poem! I'm looking forward to many more!

Welcome to Passions! Glad you could join!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-05-13 11:21 AM

Welcome to Passions..
Very enjoyable first post.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-05-13 12:18 PM

Archea

"i look on the luster
the radient beings.
will this dark cluster fully ensnare?
or will the beams
shine outward there."

Liked this! Welcome to Passions!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2006-05-13 04:18 PM

Lonny~
VERY nice ... WELCOME to PiP~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

6 posted 2006-05-13 04:23 PM

this poems gives me hope its dark but offers Optimism at the end, great imagery ^_^

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2006-05-13 10:36 PM

Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your first post very much and look forward to reading more. I hope you will enjoy the Blue Pages as much as I have.

miscellanea

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2006-05-13 10:43 PM

I enjoyed the play of light against dark, that you see light as prevailing. Though not being religious, I embrace a hopefulness that humankind will someday be kind, that the lights will go on in the heads of those who are stuck in dark recesses.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2006-05-13 10:54 PM

Very nice indeed.
Welcome to Passions.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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