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bens101
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since 2006-05-05
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0 posted 2006-05-13 12:04 PM





  

  Dear God
  thank you for your gift
  every day when we are born
  the feeling is incredible
  thankfull we are your only children.


  We are the ones
  who take the time
  to walk with the devil
  make sure you won't fail
  so you will soon get your wings.


  I need help though
  my wings won't work
  I saved to many people
  lost my innocence
  and they saw my fluffy clouds.


  The stairway to heaven
  has dissapeared again
  please look in your heart now
  and make me reborn
  mend my broken hands.
  Benjamin Prins  2006.



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Archea
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since 2006-05-13
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1 posted 2006-05-13 03:46 AM


exellent way to end this poem, "mend my broken hands"...  loved this line.
Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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2 posted 2006-05-13 09:21 AM


this gave me goosebumps..this is making me cry...nodding over here..I pray for the same...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-05-13 05:07 PM


Beautiful!
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