Open Poetry #37 |
A Prayer For Our Broken Wings |
bens101 Junior Member
since 2006-05-05
Posts 32 |
Dear God thank you for your gift every day when we are born the feeling is incredible thankfull we are your only children. We are the ones who take the time to walk with the devil make sure you won't fail so you will soon get your wings. I need help though my wings won't work I saved to many people lost my innocence and they saw my fluffy clouds. The stairway to heaven has dissapeared again please look in your heart now and make me reborn mend my broken hands. Benjamin Prins 2006. |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
exellent way to end this poem, "mend my broken hands"... loved this line. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
this gave me goosebumps..this is making me cry...nodding over here..I pray for the same... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful! |
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