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Open Poetry #37

Mansion made out of Stone

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-12 10:36 PM

I closed the car door when I loaded my suitcase
After leaving a note of good-bye.
Soon you'll be learning
That I'm never returning,
So I want you to understand why.

That I signed all the papers
My Attorney asked of me
So you'd know how
It's felt all along.

To be so Rejected,
Mistreated, Neglected
In your mansion made out of stone.

As I pulled from the driveway
To that long open highway
I look back on the way things have been.

All your promises broken
Yes, so many words spoken
That I hope never happens again.

Oh, I know you could give more
Then I ever could hope for
But I'd rather be living alone.

Then to be so Rejected,
Mistreated, Neglected
In your mansion made out of stone.

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

1 posted 2006-05-12 10:54 PM

A good one Debo, paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-05-12 11:20 PM

an achinggood write
sometimes
you just gotta go

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2006-05-13 03:08 AM

May your journey away from the mansion of stone find you in a garden of flowers and sunshine - and a thinking stone to sit on and contemplate the beauty around you - and of course, a good man to share it with you.

- Owl

Archea
Member

since 2006-05-13

Posts 65
United States

4 posted 2006-05-13 04:12 AM

sounded really good. made me feel sorry for you...

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