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themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-05-12 06:13 PM

Although I have not gotten many comments for my posts
I only want to thank you all
For your comments and your writing
Than the ordinary onlooker to me
You see the world as I see it
You have such passions as I have
And you have written from the heart as I have written
We share the poet’s soul

I wish only this, if you have seen only this see more of me
For I will thee and tell you what I think
I wish for all, as I hope you wish, only kind and happy love
Warm winters and warm springs
Hearing the beauty as the summer bird sings
Without worry for the fall

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-12 07:04 PM

you are a delight

and I hope others will read you, as I have

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-05-12 07:08 PM

and it would be nice if you stuck around
for a bit....welcome!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-05-12 08:11 PM

Very nicely penned. Welcome to Passions!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-05-12 08:14 PM

Welcome to Passions.
TD

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2006-05-12 08:50 PM

I dont quite honestly know whether it stops

I did a bit of work Tag

But there always someone

And the someone is you

When it rains down your window

You might look at a spider

A drop of rain

How everyone feels

But then

You have to hide

No-one likes

A know-it-all

You look at writing from self
All the words combined

Try writing

Not of self

Then

Who are you

You can

At it's worst

Write as you assume

People

Treasure your words

Split the brain in two

Or keep a simple brain

***********************************

Write in peace

Dave

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-05-12 09:02 PM

Much enjoyed the read...
Welcome to Passions!

Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2006-05-12 09:34 PM

read and write, read and write . . .
two sides of the coin

BROTHER JOHN
Member

since 2006-04-06

Posts 386

8 posted 2006-05-13 01:56 AM

Thanks for reading my poem and your nice comments. Yes, I like YOUR HONESTY as I read your lines. Keep on keeping on!!!

Archea
Member

since 2006-05-13

Posts 65
United States

9 posted 2006-05-13 05:23 AM

very nice, i feel the same.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2006-05-13 06:12 PM

nicely said!

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