Did I - a bit heavy but I'll go for it

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Open Poetry #37

Did I - a bit heavy but I'll go for it

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-20 06:46 PM

Not personal, based on motel life

Dave

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Where did understanding go met you a few times
Scatty who was scatty but you professed all times
When a woman smiles you mentally check the score
Was it something I did, or didn't was it before or future

Was I warm when I met you was I feeling dead
Was that I really knew you or just facade instead
Was it that I loved you on such short notice
Did I just have a day and edged onto nonsense

Did I meet you again and again in a hotel
Did I never meet but just a motel yowtel

What is the secret to "I dont want success"
When I needed my beans cooked
And you cleaned the hotel microwave

Did I
Ever tell you
I had a feeling for you

Yes I did
But
I have more respect

Than to excuse myself
And my thoughts

And to
Use you

kevinbrianwright
Junior Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 35
NYC

1 posted 2006-01-20 06:54 PM

well crafted, great write

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-01-20 08:15 PM

Scattered sense, is what this is....

and it likes me!

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2006-01-20 08:41 PM

Thanks Kevin

Sunshine

Hope things are going well for you

I have dropped into something - Senior guy building a whole industry almost for a consultancy.

You get torn between knowing you can do and wanting not to.

I'm not ready to write but it is creeping up on my

I really hope everything is going well for you Sunshine

Dave

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2006-01-22 10:10 PM

like you say much of what we do is use and throw away...

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2006-01-22 10:10 PM

like you say much of what we do is use and throw away...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2006-01-24 06:18 PM

Enjoyed...James

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2006-01-30 10:40 PM

enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

8 posted 2006-01-31 06:18 PM

Thanks all

I Need to book the next hotel

Dave

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