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Open Poetry #37

Nikki The Butterfly

bens101
Junior Member

since 2006-05-05

Posts 32

0 posted 2006-05-12 12:23 PM

   She was so scared
   no one came near her
   not even to talk
   or ask a for a hug
   because she knew it was just the begining.

   Everyone knew
   she was deep in thought
   wondering why she was put here
   never questioning
   life's deeper meaning.

   About to hatch
   take off into the world
   she discoivered a voice
   speaking her opinion
   always knowing what to say.

   So hungry
   never quite full
   the essence of flight
   took off into the night
   becoming a beautiful butterfly.
   Benjamin Prins   2006.

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

1 posted 2006-05-12 01:46 AM

This is an wonderful write. I enjoyed it so much it reminded me of my 21 year old daughter.

Huggs Kimberly

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2006-05-12 03:09 AM

good imagery here

I liked this

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