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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
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Bloomington, IN

0 posted 2006-05-11 02:04 AM



what if I spoke the  truth?

would you believe me?

what if I told you that I'm not a beautiful young woman, living in a Castle,  at all?

What if, I told you that I was an old fat man (with Gas) living in a mobile home,  all alone?

Would you believe me?

What if I told you that I am as afraid of the future as you?

What if I told you that I don't want to believe, or most especially, re-live the past?

What if I told you that my washer and dryer fuse quit tonight, and


it looks like I will have to wear dirty  underwear tomorrow?

Would you believe me?

Would you care?

Would You?

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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
1 posted 2006-05-18 12:42 PM


::smiles::    If YOU believe it...it's real.
Atleast for you.   What would I believe?  Whatever you've got.  It's all a case of mistaken identity.  How can I draw distinctions  between the lady of the castle and the fat man?
So my answer is....  Yes

enjoyed

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