Open Poetry #37 |
Behind the walls of... |
BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Hide behind your twisted reality Escape I see you hide behind your eyes, can you come out to play? Ignore them let me whisper in your conscience Feel nothing as you play with that supposed reality Worlds apart I Feel you cry out Fanta(size) run to that castle in the sky Escape into your reality See the lies float above you Head in the direction of the pain Run run as fast as you can Escape.... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I'm not sure about the Fanta Spacing fine Direction fine But can I suggest The image is good Delivery of content dave |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
I though this was well written I liked this escape... Debo |
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