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Open Poetry #37

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howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-05-09 12:40 PM

if we ever meet again

will i be your friend

          this time

or will my rhymes

     make you mad

reminding you of how bad

           i was

trying to create a buzz

      of friendship

but instead, any chance of kinship

       disappeared

when our "6 Days and 7 Nights" of romance were replaced by unverified

             fears

that could have been clarified

with a few more years

    of understanding

                              love,

                              howard

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2006-05-09 02:15 PM

sad

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2006-05-09 02:35 PM

Seems you have still not learnt what a stanza is and you've been here a while maybe you like the beginner style

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-05-09 03:30 PM

I like the sytle
it's different

variety is the spice of life

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

4 posted 2006-05-10 01:39 PM

"stanza"??? ...... hmmm..........

i thought that was a car

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