Open Poetry #37 |
Falling....Ebbing... |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
How gentle is the touch under summers amber burst? Cool streams of air, caressing faces, as eyes drown, peer into souls, deeper than off shore oceans. Knowing minds joining together, as the tide comes ashore in silver threaded lines. Heart suffocating, falling into the waves of love, carmine- amber warmth inducing joint dreams never to be bettered. Flowing and ebbing as we stare to the sun, falling through into the great sea of midnights cerulean sky. Surer than the sands of time, love will endure forever. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Sounds like a good Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~another amber glow~ enjoyed this greatly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always the perfect picture of beauty |
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juj1 Junior Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 22Laval Quebec Ca |
enjoyed greatly. An awesome read from start to finish |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Surer than the sands of time, love will endure forever..... Yes it will.... So nice to see this.... ~VQ J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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MonCherie New Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 8 |
Oh, that one wishes to love and be loved, as this! |
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