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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-05-08 05:35 PM



How gentle is the
touch under summers amber burst?
Cool streams of air,
caressing faces, as eyes
drown, peer into souls,
deeper than off shore oceans.
Knowing minds joining together,
as the tide comes ashore
in silver threaded lines.
Heart suffocating, falling into
the waves of love, carmine-
amber warmth inducing joint dreams
never to be bettered.
Flowing and ebbing as we
stare to the sun,
falling through into the great sea
of midnights cerulean sky.
Surer than the sands of time,
love will endure forever.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-08 05:48 PM


Sounds like a good

Dave

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-05-08 05:52 PM


~another amber glow~ enjoyed this greatly
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-05-08 07:15 PM


always the perfect picture of beauty
juj1
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4 posted 2006-05-08 09:46 PM


enjoyed greatly. An awesome read from start to finish
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2006-05-08 10:10 PM


Surer than the sands of time,
love will endure forever.....

Yes it will....

So nice to see this....

~VQ

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

MonCherie
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6 posted 2006-05-08 11:52 PM


Oh, that one wishes to love and be loved, as this!
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