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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-05-08 07:53 AM

Rewrite Repost:

When Time Stands Still

There is no tick within
And time is not a sin
The mirror shows her view
Of lovely old and true

Though change continues change
And though it seems quite strange
My eyes still see a bride
Where smiles of youth abide

I do not see the mirrored view
For what I see is young and true
This is the beauty stays my mind
Fresh and true and unrefined

And will for me forever be
Her look into eternity
Her grace that start my hearts begin
And stays all time my mind within

And I am sure she sees this view her
Prince charming that her heart first knew

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-05-08 01:54 PM

and that is what true loving is meant to be...

a sweet write, Sy

M

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-05-08 02:19 PM

Quality

Dave

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2006-05-08 02:59 PM

I am sure she sees exactly that!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2006-05-08 05:50 PM

if only we could all remain in that gaze *sigh*

precious write Sy

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2006-05-08 05:57 PM

How we see things is so amazing..yes i am sure that we will always remember people in a set way..when prime beauty blushes on the skin of time..thank you for this write Sey..enjoyed..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

6 posted 2006-05-08 06:01 PM

aw, what a tender heart write!
~sigh~ may she always be that beautiful bride in your eyes

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2006-05-08 06:12 PM

Seymour~
You make our hearts go pitty-pat, pitty-pat~
This is just a *sigh* waiting for a place to happen~
It happened here ...

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2006-05-08 09:24 PM

Without question Sir Sy, the view is most
certainly as you have spoken of...I have
always said that behind the eyes of an older
person is the heart, soul and spirit of a
child...

juj1
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 22
Laval Quebec Ca

9 posted 2006-05-08 09:49 PM

A moving piece, undescribable how it sinks into our hearts and decides to stay there for a while. Trully enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2006-05-09 08:21 AM

I'm off to the doctors with Isabel, so I'll
just say all your replies were wonderful and I thank you sincerly.

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

11 posted 2006-05-09 04:46 PM

and darn it Sy... you make me want to demand this too! grins.

good to read you hun...'tis been too long methinks...(years???)

take care!
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2006-05-09 07:49 PM

devina
Yes it has, thank you sweet.

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