Open Poetry #37 |
When Time Stands Still |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rewrite Repost: When Time Stands Still There is no tick within And time is not a sin The mirror shows her view Of lovely old and true Though change continues change And though it seems quite strange My eyes still see a bride Where smiles of youth abide I do not see the mirrored view For what I see is young and true This is the beauty stays my mind Fresh and true and unrefined And will for me forever be Her look into eternity Her grace that start my hearts begin And stays all time my mind within And I am sure she sees this view her Prince charming that her heart first knew |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and that is what true loving is meant to be... a sweet write, Sy M |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Quality Dave |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am sure she sees exactly that! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if only we could all remain in that gaze *sigh* precious write Sy |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
How we see things is so amazing..yes i am sure that we will always remember people in a set way..when prime beauty blushes on the skin of time..thank you for this write Sey..enjoyed.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aw, what a tender heart write! ~sigh~ may she always be that beautiful bride in your eyes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You make our hearts go pitty-pat, pitty-pat~ This is just a *sigh* waiting for a place to happen~ It happened here ... *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Without question Sir Sy, the view is most certainly as you have spoken of...I have always said that behind the eyes of an older person is the heart, soul and spirit of a child... |
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juj1 Junior Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 22Laval Quebec Ca |
A moving piece, undescribable how it sinks into our hearts and decides to stay there for a while. Trully enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I'm off to the doctors with Isabel, so I'll just say all your replies were wonderful and I thank you sincerly. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
and darn it Sy... you make me want to demand this too! grins. good to read you hun...'tis been too long methinks...(years???) take care! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
devina Yes it has, thank you sweet. |
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