navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » The Nature of Spirits
Open Poetry #37
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Nature of Spirits Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Liz Sinclair
Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93
Atlantis

0 posted 2006-05-07 11:35 PM



The Nature of Spirits
01/14/06

The spirit gathers in the privacy of my senses.
My eyes catch only a glimpse as my pupils dilate
to the reality of the light emitted with such sheer precision.
Off the record and sworn to secrecy,
the moment of  contact often leaves me
euphorically sedated.

A faint whisper, or that of a rustling imaginative echo,
embraces my curiosity as I plead with my surroundings,
“What do you want?”
The paralysis of thought and limb
weigh heavily upon my tormented duty.

Even with my mind eager to connect
to conscious elevation, my skin
crawls with fear and anticipation.
Frigid fingers ride bare-back
upon the doubts of my reasoning.
My thoughts, infantile in comparison
to ideals of abstract logic,
conjure allurement of death-gripped beauty.

I am eager to share the virginity of my ego
with that of yesterday’s last breath--

I repeat, “What do you want.”

A lock of my hair is moved aside,
as lips I cannot see rest gently against my ear,

“To live.”


© Copyright 2006 Lizette Sinclair - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-09 07:19 PM


There is far more to this than written

It encapsulates a fear that most have and even in a way seems to me to say "I have moved my power of attorney to a Lawyer to protect from family demanding money as their right".

It made me think and probably wrongly, of old people and families fighting for money and a bag of skin to disappear cheaply as possible.

I often get an intepretation badyly wrong and I probably have on this, but it is the image, I have

Dave

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-05-09 09:11 PM



This pleases me a lot...

thank you!


Liz Sinclair
Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93
Atlantis
3 posted 2006-05-09 11:22 PM


I thank you both so much.

Dave, I am just pleased that you would take the time to "see" what you can see.  I can tell you that it is what it is though.  (hehehe)  However, after reading your response, I could certainly see how it could be perceived differently.  That's the beauty of words...Thanks so much.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » The Nature of Spirits

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary