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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-05-07 06:17 PM





Some days
the ground shakes and I don’t remember why,
each year it takes a bit more
before the pieces fit
so I can recognize the images again,
you see,
little earthquakes happen here all the time
but no one pays attention,
like chump change
like the thump and crump of mortar rounds
don’t make nobody jump,
the dead don’t know what hit ’em
and they don’t care that I’m alive
so I keep moving,
like when the temperature was rising.

I always stay busy today,
for me
it’s the best way to ignore the memories,
though nothing makes them go away;
we sure did tell some lies those days
and make some promises,
always
tell them anything to get a kiss,
but that’s the way it is
when you’re stalking bliss
in the world of political romance,
and we sure did put on a good show
though,
bent them over the table don’t you know,
theater in the round
all around
well look at that
they’re all around,
who would notice if a few more go down,
and ever since Bing started singing
the temperature kept rising.

I was going out today,
or maybe tomorrow,
or maybe I could stay
someone’s always willing to pay,
even after tomorrow
when there’d be no more tomorrows;
my god
how we gonna move ‘em all,
how could we just walk away,
would this hollow pearl really fall,
how could it stand
when it was built on spice and ice and opium,
and there’d be no help at all
just that last radio call
just hitchers in the sky
trying to survive
when the temperature was rising.

Could I go back to being someone
in the world
when being no one here
felt so soft and comfortable
that my own skin was my best shirt,
and then
there was all the money that I’d made,
I wasn’t just crawling in the dirt
I was a master craftsman,
in a workshop
where almost every other tool and blade
seemed dull and bent
someone like me was heaven sent;
be nice though
to find another trade,
‘cause  here
we were running out of shade
and it didn’t help
to be among the few who knew it all along,
even before the temperature kept rising.

Should we stay,
no one asked me,
those who could already knew
my kind of stories always go over the side,
am I really gonna leave
hell
I’m wearing all I need,
OK
I suppose I had to find a ride;
time to hook a jump seat with the castle jarheads,
we owed each other that at least;
loud noises
real loud
the kind I just can’t hear,
the kind that made me feel empty
deep inside,
would I be the last to die?
Nah
that slot was just filled.
Semper Fi!
Check the weather?
Yeah
yesterday,
it was 105
and rising.

©2005, 2006 by icebox
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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2006-05-07 11:21 PM


History does repeat itself.  When the looping ends, I wonder how things will be.  Hugs sent your way, Mr. C.......jo
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2006-05-08 05:13 AM


"Some days
the ground shakes and I don’t remember why,
each year it takes a bit more
before the pieces fit"

Yes, I can understand this.  
Such a "real" write, icebox, that brings emotion tumbling down to eventually settle in a pool of sad ... and gratitude that my history is kinder on memory than yours is.  

Helen  

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-08 12:11 PM


I suppose I had to find a ride;
time to hook a jump seat with the castle jarheads,
we owed each other that at least;
loud noises


I tend to read your stuff when you write

Some loses you very quickly, others capture you from the beginning

Yours as always captures me in it's words

Dave

Martie
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4 posted 2006-05-08 12:31 PM


Icebox....Amazing! the places you have been, yet they wash you up upon the same shore of poetry where I place my words.  
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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5 posted 2006-05-08 01:47 PM


I so do look forward to every word you write.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-05-08 06:00 PM


Could I go back to being someone
in the world
when being no one here
felt so soft and comfortable
that my own skin was my best shirt,


you always make me feel, when I need to most

Martie
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7 posted 2006-05-28 12:45 PM


Just because.  
icebox
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in the shadows
8 posted 2006-05-30 09:08 PM



Thank you all for your time and thoughts.

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