Open Poetry #37 |
For Martie |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I think that poetry is an intimate conversation. I have never met Martie but I have read her poetry and feel as if I know her. This one is for Martie. Calico Basin in the evening setting sun turns the ruby hills afire a young breeze plays fast and loose with buffalo grass and Mormon tea turns its pale yellow flowers shyly from the glory of the the red Indian paint brush cliff dwelling swallows swoop low in glee playing catch me if you can with the cats claw acacia jack rabbit on his way to bed turns for one last look at the day deep purple cactus flowers close in sleep blue night slides over canyon walls and lays comfort on the silent desert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kate~ Your 'calico basin' captureda and enraptured me~ My MartieSis will LOVE this ...~ You are a very talented, poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
You are very kind Marge. Thank you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kate...I am happy to know your name so that I can call you friend. Your words take me to a place I'd like to see, have seen because of your intimate conversation. Thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I am happy you're feeling better Martie. Thank you my friend. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What an exquisite poem! I, also, have never met Martie, but in my humble opinion, you have captured her spirit and soul so beautifully in this! So it isn't only your portraits of those we don't know that appear so accurate yet magical, but you have passed the real test, with jetplane colours, of portraying one we know. - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Diana. You make me . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write for a beautiful lady Kate awesome piece! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So very lovely, Kate! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you passing shadows. I appreciate your comment. Honeybunch, thank you so much. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
this reminds me of how quickly life changes.. exquisit!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, I almost missed this one thanks to Dominique for retrieving this gem |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you for your kind comment Page. Thank you too Midnitesun. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, indeed... meeting Martie is truly a dappled moment! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you for the lovely picture Sunshine! |
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