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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-05-07 03:46 PM




I think that poetry is an intimate conversation. I have never met Martie but I have read her poetry and feel as if I know her. This one is for Martie.


Calico Basin
in the evening
setting sun turns the ruby hills
afire
a young breeze plays fast and loose with
buffalo grass
and Mormon tea turns its pale yellow flowers
shyly from the glory of the
the red Indian paint brush
cliff dwelling swallows
swoop low in glee
playing catch me if you can
with the cats claw acacia
jack rabbit on his way to bed
turns for one last look at the day
deep purple cactus flowers
close in sleep
blue night slides over canyon walls
and lays comfort on the silent desert  

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-05-07 04:11 PM


Kate~
Your 'calico basin' captureda and enraptured me~
My MartieSis will LOVE this ...~

You are a very talented, poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
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2 posted 2006-05-07 04:20 PM




You are very kind Marge. Thank you.


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3 posted 2006-05-07 04:21 PM


Kate...I am happy to know your name so that I can call you friend.  Your words take me to a place I'd like to see, have seen because of your intimate conversation.  Thank you.  
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-05-07 04:28 PM



I am happy you're feeling better Martie. Thank you my friend.  

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5 posted 2006-05-08 08:03 PM


What an exquisite poem!  I, also, have never met Martie, but in my humble opinion, you have captured her spirit and soul so beautifully in this!  So it isn't only your portraits of those we don't know that appear so accurate yet magical, but you have passed the real test, with jetplane colours, of portraying one we know.

- Owl

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-05-08 10:44 PM




Thank you Diana. You make me .





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7 posted 2006-05-09 04:47 AM


beautiful write for a beautiful lady Kate
awesome piece!

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8 posted 2006-05-09 11:53 AM


So very lovely, Kate!
The Lady
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9 posted 2006-05-09 05:35 PM




Thank you passing shadows. I appreciate your comment.

Honeybunch, thank you so much.

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10 posted 2006-05-30 12:54 PM


this reminds me of how quickly life changes.. exquisit!!
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11 posted 2006-05-30 12:59 PM


wow, I almost missed this one
thanks to Dominique
for retrieving this gem

The Lady
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12 posted 2006-05-30 01:07 AM



Thank you for your kind comment Page.

Thank you too Midnitesun.

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13 posted 2006-07-12 07:51 AM



Yes, indeed...
meeting Martie is truly
a dappled moment!


The Lady
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14 posted 2006-07-12 05:46 PM




Thank you for the lovely picture Sunshine!


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