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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-05-06 06:17 AM



Why...

Whenever there,
words finding me at a loss
a blog of questioning thoughts
time stretched out
blending the known and unknown
loosening the love

Sometimes uninvited,
sometimes buried with the falling behind
of the dawn of tomorrow
of the rainbow's end
of a yesterday's belief
and secrets kept

A tapestry of silent screams
seeping out one by one
those whispers of denial surrounding
your portrait, sideways,
musing me to this
"caring" resting feather light...

with betrayal
a breath away.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-05-06 08:49 AM


A dreamlike quality to this write, almost as a foggy morning that clarifies itself in the end.  I really liked the punch. A sweetly sad introspection.
Hugs,
TD

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-05-06 05:52 PM


Just one of those days, TD...thanks for reading

hugs
M

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