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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-05 12:58 PM


I took a chance
I had faith in you
A strong belief that
I could trust in you
I gave you a tiny piece
Of my already crushed heart
With sincerity I believed in a love
Creating a dream world
Kissed by lips of untouched illusions
You betrayed my heart and trust
I mended your low sence of self
And faith was its form
I gingerly choose to retreat


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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2006-05-07 12:48 PM


Friends may let you down and your faith in them may be undeserved, yet we can never give up looking for good friendships and looking to God the one who will never let us down..  hugs.. Songbird
jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-05-07 10:08 PM


Thank you songbird for both your faith and your friendship for that I forever thankful.

Huggs Kimberly


jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
3 posted 2006-05-07 10:11 PM


Thank you songbird for both your faith and your friendship for that I'm forever thankful.

Huggs Kimberly


Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-05-09 09:34 PM


You have a beautiful talent

An essence dancing on an underlaying feeling of words

You should have had better

From this site

Dave

shades of paul
Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
5 posted 2006-05-09 09:44 PM


"Kissed by lips of untouched illusions"
Loved it .........................paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

juj1
Junior Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 22
Laval Quebec Ca
6 posted 2006-05-09 10:37 PM


Life is a game of hatred and love, only you can choose which path to take first and then get crushed by the other.
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