Open Poetry #37 |
A Repost For you…Lord Byron |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
A Repost For you…Lord Byron spring this year showed me green as I curled around your words and fell heart first into blossoms boldly intoxicating all senses known bathing in color’s lip kissed petals the dancing romance before the fruit and in that yield I found wonderment a white clothed feast that dripped in ripe that fed many but saved me alone from starving your umbrella leaves gave sheltered shade in being apart from dry scorching loneliness and a canopy that caught my tears of miss there is much comfort in your poetic branches the masses know you as their gossamer apple but I alone truly know the sap of your love summer fell and the season changed with pages drifting from text as words twirled end on end to dance in breeze of books and personal letters where layers of white pile littering my floor as well as cover the ground in which had I read you February finds me longing for the reach of bark not nestled in the forest of this paper mached affair pack quickly to catch the next boat back to me for I need of not your words to read but to be read to forever more…Lizzy p.s. your words stir my heart but you still stir my soul just some words cut out |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you are so lovely |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I havent' read you in a while, and I'm so happy to have ventured in....this was extremely discriptive, loaded with marvelous visuals...I especially liked this... as I curled around your words and fell heart first into blossoms boldly intoxicating all senses known bathing in color’s lip kissed petals the dancing romance before the fruit and in that yield I found wonderment Outstanding!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
agreeing with serenity here |
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