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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-05-04 08:56 AM



Orchestrated tones of nature befall this day
in a glorious melody of winds rushing in to play
above and below, circling around.  What delight!
To behold this vision;
oh what a sight so wonderful
to be seen are  colors drifting,
minted in green
leaves swirling, twirling
gently pirouetted in air
and I alone

held no care
for I was transfixed
so caught up in this show
floating so softly
falling like snow
while crescendos built
on the breeze through trees
playing songs
while painting tapestries

so serene and so divine.
This moment so special
I would claim as mine
to carry it with me
so that I might share it with you

this place caught in time
this magical view
an event that might never
happen again

these sights, these sounds

this symphony

of wind.


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James_A_Fraser
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1 posted 2006-05-04 09:00 AM


There's only one Martie, and the world needs so many ~~ you've caught her spirit well with this, beautifully in fact.



~~J

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-05-04 09:01 AM


this was absolute poetry, music, insightful as well as thoughtful and kind...she will love this, not to mention, she is sorely missed, thank goodness she's home!...love and hugs to you Linda
thank you for writing and sharing.

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-04-2006 09:45 AM).]

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-05-04 09:45 AM



If Martie were wind...
and not flesh and bone,
we would all truly enjoy
the beauty of this tone...

thank you for this sharing of beauty...




Midnitesun
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4 posted 2006-05-04 09:03 PM


~oh, what a gorgeous write!
I am keeping this beauty~

El_Campeador
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5 posted 2006-05-04 09:36 PM


Lovely, like so much that flows from your pen!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

lgina
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6 posted 2006-05-04 10:23 PM


This is a beautiful write for Martie.  It really sounds lovely.  Thanks
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2006-05-05 11:17 PM


you sing with her voice in this tribute
lovely and lyrical

Paul Wilson
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8 posted 2006-05-06 07:08 AM


Donna...Beautiful words, I'm sure Martie will love it. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Martie
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9 posted 2006-05-06 10:05 AM


Donna...the gift of this poem is blowing through the trees of me with such beauty that a symphony is!  Thank you.  
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