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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2006-05-04 08:33 AM


the great ultimate

Seeping through the story
like an apparition finds melody
impulses to the manners of a world

fragments of purpose, structure
heightened by harmonious sorcerers

hints of sketches intervening with
embodied sentiments

there…
there

i find humanizing perception
graced by the pangs of misfortunes
& abodes of horror
bursting with nutrients
substantial
whistling winds
in denial
proudly termed patience
that would startle
even the most secure agony

what imagination turns adrift into
an unknown sea…fearless?

selfish schemes drafting fortitudes
thinking personal insults
enter the minds of sleeping spirits
while
ivy tears away from stones of time
revealing an entrance
suspended
perpetually
marking life’s blood

acknowledgement of the contrary
bare heroic determination
rocks gently
the eloquence of heartache
listening
spending itself
from the simplest form of reason

presiding like some strange master sense
of some greater part
of pleasures of life
some involuntary respect
admired by natural consequence
consequence?
i think not!
nothing is consequence

sparks of hope
rouse the mind, gnawing
into harmony, some semblance of freedom
rays persuading the stillness of love

continually employed by dark horizons
which find happiness in the sweet
blossoms of first light
melding into some equal impression
strongly suggesting
that misery
knows a mother’s embrace

and those that prey on society
thus degrade an assumed aspect
repulses any reward
entrapping
fraudulent ground

there is an amiable mission
of light alive in the eyes of
the virtuous…there are keepers
with morning voice
& eager ears

their stories muse intellect
foreboding any pathetic ballad
or half opened doors

for the moment
absorbing happy
where the wide gaze of day
invites us to it’s window

leading us toward the unknown
& to,
there are clouds of twilight
where long silent shadows live
together in the stillness of nature’s
suspense

donations

of
sentiments

curled with truth, lies, perhaps
the well known hand of characteristics
coloring circumstance, interference

affording the chance of change

of storms
of compassion, sympathy

and a sincere lover far superior

then any place we’ve ever known

marking the lucid beam of counter-balance
in the safe and secure ocean of our home

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-04-2006 09:33 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-05-04 10:04 AM


LeeJ
You have described a wind that circumnavigates the world. Good morning sweety.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2006-05-04 11:48 PM


Talk about yer "big bang"!

I confess tho, I must have only thought I was following this, as this--

"nothing is consequence"

unless of course, I'm thinking too personally linear.

(Lately all I seem to have is consequence as I am instant karma personified! )

exhale

it's just great to read you again, as I swear, it's like sparkles spiraling

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2006-05-05 12:06 PM


Aptly named this penning Ms LeeJ...
Loved every line.
TD

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2006-05-05 02:17 AM


LeeJ, this is proof I don't get in here often enought!     I think this is outstanding and truly one of your best yet!  *hugs*...jo
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2006-05-05 03:43 AM


So good to see ya posting LeeJ. love ya, martyjo
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