Open Poetry #37 |
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The Fly in Grandma's Kitchen |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN ![]() |
There's a fly in Grandma's kitchen; Don't know how it came to be, Maybe crawled in through a crevice That is much too small to see. There's a fly in Grandma's kitchen; But no one seems to care. Daddy's eating sweet potatoes; You can bet he'll get his share. There's a fly in Grandma's kitchen; I wonder, does it hear Mama's talk about the flowers That she planted this past year? There's a fly in Grandma's kitchen; Likes the roast and gravy too. It crawled across the biscuits, Then into a cup it flew. There's a fly in Grandma's kitchen; Don't know how it came to be. Grandpa drinks his coffee very fast; Now fly is history. |
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Farkas Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 20 |
Hi I found your poem very humorous LOL. Farkas |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's cute LOL |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
cute write. Enjoyed very much. martyjo |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I often find some poems with a main repeating line such as this "There's a fly in Grandma's kitchen" at times can turn out to be boring and poorly written but that said, in reading this poem to the end, I found it a pleasant read well done a poet who cares |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
good job i liked this |
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