Open Poetry #37 |
Drifting of Log and Smoke |
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Gray diffuses at dusk Webbing warmth to winter sky Leaving Fuel behind. Trails disperse and whisper Catch me if you can. The lone log Lingers beneath first star With wishes to extend. L A T C H me if you can. [This message has been edited by miscellanea (01-20-2006 07:16 AM).] |
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kevinbrianwright Junior Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 35NYC |
Nice write..well done! Kevin Brian Wright |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ohhhhh...this is kind of different for you. I love it! sis |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here... broadly! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
several poets here, are changing their writing style, branching out...and this, simply complements not only the writer, but the reader as well...nicely done and very much enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
With wishes to extend. L A T C H me if you can. nice...you and your sister should try a duet...I bet it would turn out delightful! M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I agree with Nakdthoughts do a duet sort of throw another log on the fire and see will transpire. Gloom |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
kevin, iliana, Sunshine, LeeJ., nakdthoughts, and Professor Gloom, My appreciation to you for your comments. A duet between us sisters? Couldn't even play Chopsticks together for what I would goof it up! I don't think I'd wish my poetry upon her, although I'm sure she would be a good sport! It pleases me that you think a blend could be made. Your kindness is very much appreciated. miscellanea |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Already latched....of course! I like it when people spread their wings and try a new thing...especially when it works! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Beautiful thoughts portrayed here good write |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ratleader, Glad to see your comments. I wasn't sure if I liked the fit or not. It is good to see affirmation. Thank you, Ed. miscellanea RedStone, I'm pleased you enjoyed my thoughts. Thank you for your kind response. miscellanea |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, dear lady... The images capture me... You spread your wings so gracefully! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I concur with the Naked One's suggestion! I'd love to see you and jo collaborating on writing a poem. You'd make a dynamic duo! "Gray diffuses at dusk Webbing warmth to winter sky" ~ Beautifully penned! Have a glorious day! Linda |
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