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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

0 posted 2006-01-19 10:33 PM

Gray diffuses at dusk
Webbing warmth to winter sky
Leaving Fuel behind.

Trails disperse and whisper
Catch me if you can.
The lone log
Lingers beneath first star
With wishes to extend.

L A T C H
me if you can.

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (01-20-2006 07:16 AM).]

kevinbrianwright
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since 2006-01-19

Posts 35
NYC

1 posted 2006-01-19 11:18 PM

Nice write..well done!

Kevin Brian Wright

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-01-20 06:15 AM

Ohhhhh...this is kind of different for you. I love it!

sis

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-01-20 08:11 AM

Smiling here...

broadly!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-01-20 08:15 AM

several poets here, are changing their writing style, branching out...and this, simply complements not only the writer, but the reader as well...nicely done and very much enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2006-01-20 09:07 AM

With wishes to extend.

L A T C H
me if you can.

nice...you and your sister should try a duet...I bet it would turn out delightful!

M

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2006-01-20 02:11 PM

I agree with Nakdthoughts
do a duet
sort of throw another log on the fire
and see will transpire.

Gloom

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
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7 posted 2006-01-21 09:16 PM

kevin, iliana, Sunshine, LeeJ., nakdthoughts, and Professor Gloom,

   My appreciation to you for your comments.
A duet between us sisters?  Couldn't even play Chopsticks together for what I would goof it up!  I don't think I'd wish my poetry upon her, although I'm sure she would be a good sport!  It pleases me that you think a blend could be made.  Your kindness is very much appreciated.

miscellanea

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2006-01-25 01:13 AM

Already latched....of course! I like it when people spread their wings and try a new thing...especially when it works!

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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

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uk

9 posted 2006-01-25 04:42 AM

Beautiful thoughts portrayed here good write

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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10 posted 2006-01-25 08:29 AM

Ratleader,

   Glad to see your comments.  I wasn't sure if I liked the fit or not.  It is good to see affirmation.  Thank you, Ed.

             miscellanea

RedStone,

   I'm pleased you enjoyed my thoughts.  Thank you for your kind response.

            miscellanea

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

11 posted 2006-01-26 08:57 AM

I like this very much, dear lady... The images capture me... You spread your wings so gracefully! *S*

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

12 posted 2006-01-26 09:13 AM

I concur with the Naked One's suggestion!

I'd love to see you and jo collaborating on writing a poem. You'd make a dynamic duo!

"Gray diffuses at dusk
Webbing warmth to winter sky"

~ Beautifully penned!

Have a glorious day!
Linda

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