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kevinbrianwright
Junior Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 35
NYC

0 posted 2006-01-19 09:40 PM

She creates life everlasting from clouds that stand unshaken. God is governed by her beauty and has ordained her to soar above heavens kingdom. Because she is heir to his throne. Her radiance is of all languages, all speech and all religions. She changes the winds of time and unchains all ethereal melodies until they will return. Her sweetness is an open gift from God as it is an open gift to the pleasure eye of man. I am the Nightingale of paradise, the master of the mother tongue. Where wondrous expressions are penned in such holy verses about her unfaltering beauty to the sense of sight. Her sweet air beyond a mortal flame kindles within its own aurora. Blowing out the candle of wishing stars upon there dim glow. O’ come dear saint! Come as the burning lamp of light, and guide me on the homeward path of the unending love of our hearts.

Kevin Brian Wright

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-01-19 11:24 PM

I'm in enough trouble with God today, I don't know why I am replying to this. LOL, did you mean to imply that God (himself) is governed by her beauty? or did you mean that God governs (us earthlings) by her beauty? and is she Mother Nature?

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-01-19 11:53 PM

I find your poem very thought provoking Kevin. I too, would like to know who she is. Nice work.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2006-01-20 01:20 AM

Beautiful read. Hope to see more.
Welcome to PIP

:-)

Enjoyed this read

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2006-01-20 03:50 AM

Welcome to PIP, Kevin.

This was amazing, reminded me of Saul Williams, are you familar with his work?

He speaks of She as a part of he and She being all of it and a woman and Earth and everything revolving around him and inside of him.

I wish I had written these lines:

I am the Nightingale of paradise, the master of the mother tongue.

Very nice indeed! I love this.

kevinbrianwright
Junior Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 35
NYC

5 posted 2006-01-20 06:12 AM

Thank you all for your replies and kind words! I will be posting more poems, I'm sure you will figure out who she is!

Kevin.

Kevin Brian Wright

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2006-01-20 07:54 AM

Welcome to Passions, Kevin. Please, check your Email for a Special Greeting!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2006-01-20 09:00 AM

Welcome to Passions Kevin!
I so much enjoyed your first post.
I too look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

kevinbrianwright
Junior Member

since 2006-01-19

Posts 35
NYC

8 posted 2006-01-20 03:36 PM

Thank you!

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