Open Poetry #37 |
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Romantic on the fly and Oracle RAC after that |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Chestnut in that strand that swung silhouetted Framed by short cut fringe decorated by shadows Trevassed by volcanic eyes melted into sunlight And within my image on the water in my innermost sense Looks like another ten years Dave Darken clouds halo’d light to imagine you Worlds spun Quiet smile Silencing windswept breath saluting In motion Earth held it’s gaze In an image in translucent light Quiet smile Silencing windswept breath saluting In motion Edited by me Dave [This message has been edited by Bodger (05-02-2006 04:46 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write Dave. Eric |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks Eric But I still have to print off the RAC and read it Poetry, I can tell you, is easy, compared to that Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
You always amaze with your words. Enjoyed the read. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the read as always Dave. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome...you're right, you know. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks but I have tried to edit it and I wont put any words to it until I feel they are there Dave |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I vote with the others. You have a beautiful way with words. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
No my lady Words have a beautiful way with me Dave |
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